August 2023 Round Robin – POV

This month the lovely people at Round Robin are having a conversation about POV. The question is which we prefer to read and write in, and boy do I have some things to say here!

Somewhere, some way, I grew into the belief that it wasn’t a professional book unless it was written in Third Person. Limited or Omniscient didn’t matter, but it had to be third person. I have no idea where this came from, I just know that it stuck and for a very long time I focused on Third Person exclusively.

I shied away from First Person Books even if they were on the NY Times Bestseller lists.

Except for Outlander by Diana Gabaldon, which I fell in love with. But I told myself it was a fluke and really, she broke the rules in book 2 of that series and sort of hopped between First Person and Third Person and it worked really well. So well that I might give that a try.

Most of my books are in Third Person Limited, and I do enjoy writing in it. Some of my favorite books are all in Third Person as well, The Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare or Six of Crows by Leigh Bardugo or His Majesties Dragon by Naomi Novik, just to name a few. I do have to admit that I prefer Limited to Omniscient. I do not enjoy hopping from one character to another in a scene, it feels like cheating and – at least to me – I feel like the real motivations/emotions get skimmed over for the characters.

I prefer when the author digs in like a tick and unearths those really big, core things about each character.

And then…

And then I read A Court of Thorns and Roses by Sara J Maas.

This is, for most of the series, First Person POV.

And I loved every second of that journey.

Suddenly my very shallow understanding of POV was challenged. I don’t know what teacher impressed upon me the need for Third Person, but it had to have been someone influential in my younger years to implant this in me for so long, and I must admit now that this is an entirely WRONG standpoint.

With that in mind, I approached Nora and the Werewolf Wedding from a First Person POV. This was my first real foray into that POV, and I loved writing in it.

As in, I blew through the first draft of Nora’s second book in three months. And the third book is looking like it’ll take just about the same amount of time. There is a flow to the narrative that I haven’t been able to catch with Third Person POV, and it limits what I’m writing to precisely what Nora feels/sees/tries. This adds a sense of immediacy to the story.

This isn’t to say that I am abandoning Third Person limited. Last Child of Winter was written in Third Person and I deeply love that story. What this does say is that POV is a tool, just like all the other tools at a writer’s disposal, and everything is going to come down to the story the author wants to tell. A good author can make any POV work for them to enhance the story.

Check out what my fellow authors have to say about POV!

Anne Stenhouse http://annestenhousenovelist.wordpress.com

Connie Vines http://mizging.blogspot.com/

Helena Fairfax http://www.helenafairfax.com/blog

A.J. Maguire https://ajmaguire.wordpress.com/ ( YOU ARE HERE)

Skye Taylor http://www.skye-writer.com/blogging_by_the_sea


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7 responses to “August 2023 Round Robin – POV”

  1. Connie Vines Avatar

    I enjoyed your blog post. Your analytical process of a novel you’ve read is always insightful.

    1. ajmaguire Avatar

      Sadly, I am too analytical in my writing too. I need more poetry in my narratives.

      1. Connie Vines Avatar

        We all have our writing challenges:-). I believe when we recognize our weaknesses we are able to develop the skill.

  2. Skyewriter Avatar

    Great post – you really can teach an old dog ( or just older dog) new tricks. Have a good time with your adventure into first person. I do agree that head-hopping in third person limited can be confusing and I stay away from it with one main exception. If I am writing a romance and the pivotal scene where their love is finally admitted, experienced with anything from a declaration to a kiss to a romp between the sheets. I feel like we’ve watched these two people fall in love for the last 200-300 pages and now that they are getting it on, I want to know how both are feeling. I do engineer the transition only once in the scene, and I’m very careful about preparing my reader to make the leap with me and not even notice they’ve done so, yet have no confusion about who’s head they are in. I also tend to avoid omniscient as I feel like I’m too far from the action.

    1. ajmaguire Avatar

      See, I’ve come to the understanding that I am not a super romantic person myself. I love the genre, I read it like crazy, but romantic gestures go right over my head.

  3. Helena Fairfax Avatar

    I love how you immersed yourself in first person. Writing can be such a joy at times, and you really show it in this post. I love your book list, too, and have read most of them. I’ve never read anything by Naomi Novik. Thanks for the recommendation. She’s now on my list!

    1. ajmaguire Avatar

      Naomi Novik is so much fun! Napoleon Wars with Dragons.

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